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September 12, 2008 by Miss Leaman

As we arrived at the railway station…

I know I was going to leave soon so I sadly let go of my mums hand so I could board the giant shiny Hornsby train, It was as sad as a rainy day.

The train crawled out of the station, I sadly waved goodbye to my mum.

I tried to smile at my mum to show I was as brave as a soldier, but I was worried about the people might not like me or I might not like the place I’m at. To take it of my mind I played with my yo-yo. Up and down up and down, soon I got bored and hungry so I got the ham sandwiches out that I brought with me. When I looked out the window all the trees stood to attention.

By Michael M

Posted in Michael | 10 Comments

10 Responses

on September 13, 2008 at 12:21 pm | Reply missile mike

hi miss leaman thanks for puting up my work up my work I hope people like it!
on September 16, 2008 at 3:06 pm | Reply JJ

Hallo Michael, I really like your’e piece of work. thanks for your comment
on September 17, 2008 at 7:56 am | Reply Samantha

I am pleased with your work and I hope everyone else is pleased too!
on September 17, 2008 at 7:57 am | Reply Letitia

Well done MICHAEL! I am very pleased with your work and I hope some other people send replies to you.
on September 20, 2008 at 2:16 pm | Reply missile mike

Thanks! I hope other people like it 2 tish,sam,jj!
on October 2, 2008 at 7:19 pm | Reply monkey from space =haydn

WOW! missile mike this work is speechless it is so good this is the best bit of work I have looked at.

ROCK ON FREAKY BRO!!
Hi
on October 3, 2008 at 3:18 pm | Reply Missile Mike

Dunno about Freaky bro???
But your a Mad Maonkey from space!!!
on October 3, 2008 at 3:19 pm | Reply Missile Mike

P.S Hi
on October 8, 2008 at 1:16 pm | Reply Missile Mike

Any more coments???
on March 24, 2009 at 4:37 pm | Reply Missile Mike

Everyone who had a look please go to my blog!